Winning Stories

Winning Stories


2021 Winning Stories

by Nana Adwoa Adoma Makafui Osei-Mensah

My grandfather's death had the most impact on my life in 2021.


It was a beautiful Friday the 13th morning. Mommy and I were listening to JoyFM’s Super Morning Show on the way to drop me off at school. We were on the shalom spot road from Klagon when the radio switched to phone mode. It was Daddy’s stepmother, Grandma Adubea.


Mommy picked up the line from her steering wheel, shocked.

Grandma didn’t usually call, and it was 7:35 in the am! Strange, I thought, stuffing down a piece of caramel chocolate gifted me the day before.


“Hello,Ma?"Jane!Janeei!Aaah aah ah aahh" ,the old woman cried from the other side of the line despairingly. Mommy’s expression changed significantlu, Her face paled then crumbled.

Death again?Always bad news, I wondered, popping a second piece into my mouth. “Mum, what's the matter? "She replied with instant panic.

Then the bombshell sped its way through the little speakers in the car.

:“Daddy died."

tI felt like a bullet had been shot through my heart. I clutched my chest ,but the tears wouldn’t come. I opened my mouth to speak but words choked me. Grandma Adobea was lying .Not grandpa. Not now..She’s crazy ,Ithought, mad, I always knew it for her.. I shook my head violently and turned abruptly to face Mommy. She was frozen in her seat.I shook her, whispering to her to cut the line before Iheard more lies..Mommy did not budge.

Iscrambled for the phone in my seat ,but the screams of the old lady and the smell of fsudden

 

stale air pounded against my head. I dropped my head. “He got a heart attack. He was in the bathroom bathing when it happened" Grandma Adobea was still sobbing when the connection went off. A heart attack!  Of all the things Grandpa could have died of.

I looked up, Mommy had gone berserk with grief.

She had finally found the life in her. The car was zig- zagging on the road,, almost colliding with two other cars and  headed into the wall of a shop.It hit hard, leaving the front  heavily damaged. Minutes later, some kind strangers pushed the  car  to an auto repair shop nearby.,Mommy was sent home, and my after school driver was called to come take me to school.

School was  terrifying. Everyone kept giving me candy as the next day was Valentine’s day. Much as I loved sweets, the shock of Grampa’s death was still with me. It felt ethereal, untrue. I got a lot of nut-filled chocolate ,which Ioved yet the gifts didn’t cure my shock.

They just reminded me all the more that  Grandpa didn’t live to celebrate my upcoming birthday with me. He had  promised to take me with him to  Apatrapa., his hometown. That I  couldn’t sit on his wobbly lap ever again and that he couldn’t tell me more inspiring stories about the many people he had met in his life made me want to cry but tears wouldn't come.

At all three break periods,I remained in my seat instead of joining my friends in the playground or finding a spot to   read. .My mind felt like a blank sheet of paper.

 A concerned friend asked me what was wrong.I shook my head and put it back  on my desk. I was sick all through teaching  periods. It got worse, I had little energyll, while class discussions were ongoing I was lost. A  teacher offered to call my parents. For most part of the day, I was exceptionally dull. I cared for no one and no thing. Coincidentally, the occasional PTA meeting was happening on the premises of the school later in the evening,so kids were to be picked up behind schedule. As some of us flopped on the warm floors of our huge Year 7 classroom later on, I prayed for the first time in months for what to do now that the man who built me up was gone. My relationship with God was strained my relationship.Then it hit

 

me. There was nowhere else to run to for comfort. Chocolates could only give me temporary pleasure,  I learnt that the hard way. The oldboy was going to die someday,I thought. So  I resolved to do the next day something I should have done a long time ago.


The very next morning, I devoted the rest of my life to Christ; it felt as if ahuge rock had been rolled off my shoulders The people I once thought were my friends showed me their true shades, and I found comfort in the ones that actually cared. 


My grandfather's death left a hole inside my heart because he was the closest to me. Grandpa will always remain in my heart. I have not recovered from his death but some  good came out of it. I found a friend in God.


by Michael Nyarko Nyardu

I was a ten year old who couldn't read. This changed in 2021 and turned my life around. My parents were  worried after having tried in so many ways to help me learn to read with little success. They finally   decided to introduce me to the community  library. 

I had never been to a library before  so I was a little scared about what would happen going to a place full of books I can't read.

On the first day, when I was going to the library, my parents told me to try and  read two books and write the words I could not pronounce in the books in my jotter.  When I got to the library I selected two books and began jotting down the big words.  I tried to say the words  out loud but it was the library so I had to do so in whispers. I went through the books really fast because the pages were not that many and I couldn't read much anyway.

 When I returned home, I showed the words I could not pronounce to my parents and they helped me to pronounce them. It was difficult at the beginning but little by little I was able to do so. 

I continued spending time in the library for a long while, going through two new books each time and writing down words I could not identify or pronounce.. My mum and dad took time everyday to help me learn the words: their meanings and how to pronounce them.


On one occasion at the library, I selected two new books as I had been doing, when i opened the first page I found I could read most of the words, happy, I began to open the other pages quickly, with each new page I could identify more words and read them in whispers.  I began  to follow the story the writer was telling. This made me so happy I forgot to write down the new words I did not know. Over time with dedication and more  practice my reading improved.

Learning how to read in 2021 after so many years of struggle  made a big impact in my life.

I've  learnt lots of new words which I have also looked up their meanings in the dictionary

I now read more smoothly than I use to  and I am  working on getting better. My mother reminds me often that practice makes perfect.

I am  -confident and not shy to answer questions in class. I feel grown up because I am learning a lot of things, I read all the writings I see on billboards by the roadside. It is so much fun!  I am glad  my parents no longer have to read everything to me before I do my homework.


I am  learning from my favourite authors how ro  write my own stories. Creating my stories is fun! My teacher says reading is needed in  everything we do,not just at school but in life as well.

Knowing how to read helped me with my school work. It improved  my english essay. I began making  the highest scores in English language tests  at school.

My regular visits to the library has taught me about  great Ghanaian and African writers like  Efua Theodora Sunderland and Wole Soyinka from Nigeria.  I have read some of their famous works  like  "Chronicles from the land of the happiest people on earth’ and the ‘Interpreters’ by Wole Soyinka.

 Also , the marriage of Anansewaa’ and ‘Play time in Africa’ by  Efua T. Sutherland. 


Most of all. I have  learnt that a person can learn about  a lot of different  people and things in the world. The library has become my favourite place because it has helped me to improve myself.

 I love that I can go on an adventure any time. I travel to different places in the world  with just  visits to library. It  it is so cool. Learning  how to read has  taught me many  fun facts I did not know.

Did you know that It is impossible to sneeze with your eyes open?

I can’t believe the most expensive book ever bought  was sold at thirty million, eight thousand US dollars, also horses and cows  sleep standing up and that elephants are the only animals that can’t jump?

 I enjoy sharing riddles with my friends  at school. None of my friends got the answer to this riddle. What has hands and a face, but cannot  hold anything or smile?

I am very  glad my parents sent me to the library. Time  at  library also helped my concentration level when reading. It also made me more  curious and  easy for me to  research as well as think in a new and better way.

If reading is difficult for you as it was for me  it will be wise for you  to spend some  time at the library or read more books. 


by Deborah Yelebegre Naa

I lay in the dusty old mattress, reminiscing, about the memories we shared, it had been six whole months since I had heard from anyone of my friends but it just wasn’t safe out there. I twisted and turned in the bed until the sheets popped right off the side of the bed. It was becoming unbearable living in such solitude, away from friends, my father and most of all my mother. 

I turned towards the door, as the rays of the sun crept across the floor onto the wall. The door creaked as I rose up from the bed, my sister poked her head through the little gap. “The food’s here” she announced, I nodded as she hastily hurried back down. I got out of bed; my knees still sore. I gazed out the window, children running around, their shrieks muffled by the deluded man singing his heart away.

Mr. Grant, gaped at me with a grin as he turned towards the door. The miserable worker always hated this part of his rounds; we lived the farthest away from all the other families, yet there was no way he could avoid this route, after all we had to eat. He always came banging on the door, grumbling his way in about how his bus’s parts were all worn and broken from his trips here.

“What’s it, this time?”, I questioned as I peeked into the bag Mr. Grant dropped off. “It’s something called food”, My sister quipped in response as she grabbed cutlery from the bottom drawer. She was the only one who really kept it together after our parents left. Everybody expected her to step up to the responsibility, there was never really time for her to breakdown, or else the whole house might breakdown as well. “It’s beans”, I replied completely ignoring her joke.

“Oh, not again” Kweku groaned at the thought of having beans for the fourth time this week. Afua grabbed the spoon from the drawer and slammed it onto the pack and slid it towards him, He pushed it away, “I don’t want beans!”, he cried. Afua abruptly stopped whatever she was searching for and once again the pack of beans glided once again across the cold counter. She stopped in anticipation of his tantrum; I could feel the tension in the air. “But beans aren’t …”, “but nothing” she yelled back at the top of her voice. Still as adamant as ever, he didn’t even take a look at the beans. “Kweku!” she screeched. He turned slightly towards the food, his fingers trembled with fear and frustration as he reached for the food.

“I’m going to tell mummy when she comes back”, he cried, he was still too young to understand, she was never coming back. Her facial expression changed the moment he uttered those words. She turned back to the rubber bag and handed me

 

my food then headed to the dining table with hers. We all sat to eat, Kweku’s spoon hovered over the food, Afua’s food salted by the tears that run down her cheek.

Breaking the silence, there was a knock on the door. I slipped out of the chair heading towards the door. “Who’s there?” I inquired as I put ear against the door to listen in. “I’m looking for Colonel Boateng”, he demanded in an imposing husky voice. I was flabbergasted, I turned to look at Afua but she was already staring at the door with her mouth to the floor, Kweku lost in the situation, looked at Afua, sucked his teeth and went back to fidgeting with his food. I looked through the peephole, his decorative medals and dog chains made it obvious who he worked for but not why he was here.

“He’s not here!” Kweku yelled from his seat. “Well can I at least come in?” the stranger asked rather politely, “No, corona!”, Kweku yelled back. “Stop that”

,Afua warned. I reached for the door handle and pulled the door open. His muddy boots come through the door, His physique is what you would expect of any soldier, he stood around six feet, well built and had a few scars, probably from conflict. His hazel-coloured eyes scanned the house as he approached the dinning table. “He’s on peacekeeping duties, so there’s no need for you to be here” Afua said, trying to turn down any thought that he would not becoming back home in one piece.

He chuckled as he pulled out a chair, he rubbed his hands through Kweku’s fuzzy hair. I stood right in front of the half-eaten beans, wondering, why he was here at this time of the day. The deafening silence filled the house, only the rustle of his fingers in Kweku’s hair could be heard. He then broke the silence, “how’s life been since your dad left?”, His question was meet with no response. The smirk he had on his face quickly disappeared. “Look” he said sternly, “your dad won’t be home for the holidays, I know it’s been tough since your mom passed way and your dad left you, so I was wondering if you wanted, to come and live with me, until your dad comes back at least.” His words echoed throughout the house, a stranger from nowhere offering to take us to his home.

“Who are you?” Afua asked, all this was probably also so strange to her. “Blankson, its on his shirt can’t you see” Kweku pointing to the embroidery on Blankson’s uniform. Blankson chuckled as he finally lifted his hands out of Kweku’s hair. Was this it? Would this have been the final highlight of the year for us.

We went up to pack our clothes, my mother’s picture hang from the wall, watching her, she would have been happy if she was still here, now, all we had to do was say good-bye or more like a ‘see you later’.

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